Watchers 9
Collection
- Sep 28
- United States
- Deviant for 17 years
- He / Him
421772,15526914,16777215,12,19,5,1,Drizu,2,9128399,2,3,13369344
Favourite genre of music: New Age
Skin of choice: Dragon scalies
Profile Comments 346
Well then, in good will I did as I promised. Now would you be willing to provide me with some feedback on your behalf?
I am yes just remember that I am not a writer so I don't know how good the feedback would be. Just give me a few days to read your story please and I will do my best
Hey, you don't have to have PhD in literary studies to know your feelings about the story. Just say what your impression is - straight from the shoulder. What's good, what's bad, what's sensible, what's senseless, etc. Honesty for honesty. As Józef Mackiewicz (Polish writer) once said: only truth is interesting. I'll appreciate any kind of feedback since it's a scarce commodity around here.
That is true
Quid pro quo, I can take a look at your poem if you like and offer some criticism.
I would like that thanks. I am not a writer and the poem was going to be in a story that my brother and I were working on that fell by the wayside
Hmm, I never tried writing in cooperation. Sounds like fun, although it may be challenging if you have different visions. Wouldn't you fancy complete the story by yourself?